Kia Ora Everyone,
For the last 2 weeks I have been writing a report about something I like. I decided to write about kiwis because kiwis are native to New Zealand.
First I planned my big idea, after that I researched information that I didn't know. Then I wrote a new paragraph for each big idea.
Please read my report by clicking on the link, also please write a comment to help me improve my writing.
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Kia ora Daniel,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your report it had very good imformation about endangered kiwis. I think that next time you could add some more images. How did you find out so many facts about endangered kiwis?
Kia Ora Erana, Thanks for your really positive comment. I found out so many facts about kiwis on the Department of Conservation Website about kiwis. I hope that this reply will give you more information about how I made my report about kiwis.
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Kia Ora Daniel. I really liked the way you chose the topic about kiwis. It also reminds me of when I really loved to write about kiwis. Maybe next time you could make it even more interesting by adding more facts.
ReplyDeleteSalaam Alaikum Amara, Thank for your amazing comment. My question to you is, What topic did you choose for your writing? I hope that you really liked my writing.
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Great job Daniel! I did not know there were five types of kiwi so I learned something new. I also didn't know they can eat eels and amphibians! Your report was very clear to read and easy to understand. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Daniel and WoW! that report on kiwis and how they were endangered and Also we must protect them and Thank you so much for being my ferend.
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