This is my first Summer Learning Journey activity that I am posting on my blog. We had the choice of three activities to do. I chose to do a poem about the moon. Here is my poem.
This is my funny poem.
The cow jumped over the moon.
He soon hit a spoon covered in doom.
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Moo! Moo! Moon! he shouted.
Only he was lonely.
Only he was a pony.
Now he is... MOONED!
This is my emotions poem.
When I landed on the moon,
I felt very doomed.
I was very scared
I felt very despaired.
It was frightening,
It felt like being struck by lighting,
on the Moon.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Daniel :)
Thanks for doing week one, day two, activity two! I think the poem you’ve made is very creative and unique. I love how enthusiastic it is, I can almost hear someone saying it! If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you?
I also really like how you’ve added an image to your post - this makes it more eye-catching and effective, and will bring more people to your blog! I can also see that you’ve attributed the image so ka pai, keep up the great work!
Thanks for posting and have a great Tuesday afternoon.
Eliza :)
Kia Ora Eliza :)
DeleteThanks for your super positive comment. I had a really fun time doing my poems. The reason I did a funny one and an emotions one is because I did a funny one but then realised I was supossed to do a felling poem but I decided to keep the funny one. If I had a chance to go to the moon I would but only for a few days.
Daniel :)
Hi Daniel,
DeleteThat's totally okay! I am really enjoying reading and commenting on all of these awesome blog posts. Aaaaah I see, well i'm glad you enjoyed doing your poems.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Eliza :)