Today I did some writing about an imaginary frog. He originally lived in the Amazon Rainforest but then he went on and adventure far far away. Anyway I'm not going to give you any more information about the story. Click on the frog picture for the link. Actually don't cause it does not work instead click on the word link below the picture. :-)
Very cool Daniel. Your story is like one of your journeys you plan out, except in the South American continent. So I could really hear your personal voice. Nice one. I liked all the detail of places you included. When and if you were to edit your story, look at changing some of your sentence starters so there are not lots that start the same way. Like...So we ... etc. Awesome working independently.
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