I have written the 4th and final part of my Frog Story!! I have embed a slideshow with all of the stories so you can read them. Anyway here is the slideshow.
Hi Daniel. I've been waiting for part 4 of your story! You have focussed on working, over a period of time, to complete your story. It is a credit to you. The imaginative ideas you have used, keep readers engaged right to the end. Is there any chance you will write about frog's adventure in his final destination, NZ, during lockdown? Perhaps when you create stories it would be easier to read, if the words were not underlined. Underlining is a wee bit distracting. The story was so interesting that I still 'hung on' to every word however. Just something to think about with future stories. Continue the fantastic effort with long distance, home learning. Great job Daniel.
Hi Daniel. I've been waiting for part 4 of your story! You have focussed on working, over a period of time, to complete your story. It is a credit to you. The imaginative ideas you have used, keep readers engaged right to the end. Is there any chance you will write about frog's adventure in his final destination, NZ, during lockdown?
ReplyDeletePerhaps when you create stories it would be easier to read, if the words were not underlined. Underlining is a wee bit distracting. The story was so interesting that I still 'hung on' to every word however. Just something to think about with future stories.
Continue the fantastic effort with long distance, home learning. Great job Daniel.