My Report about Kiwis!

Kia Ora Everyone, 

For the last 2 weeks I have been writing a report about something I like. I decided to write about kiwis because kiwis are native to New Zealand. 

First I planned my big idea, after that I researched information that I didn't know. Then I wrote a new  paragraph for each big idea. 

Please read my report by clicking on the link, also please write a comment to help me improve my writing.

Blog You Later!

Improving Blog Comments

Kia Ora Everyone, Today in Cybersmart we went onto someone's blog found a comment and gave it a makeover. I went onto Dani's blog and improved Hunter's comment which said "Hi Dani i lick this slid. Dani you cod ad a titoll. Rpliy"


My improved version says "Hi Dani, My name it Hunter I am from Titirangi School. I really liked your slideshow, even though I don’t really like KFC but I do like pizza. I reminded me of when I did animations last year as a Year 3. Next time you could improve your spelling. What it your favourite type of pizza at Pizza Hut? From Hunter, Blog you later Please Reply"

In my improved version I made it follow the correct structure, Positive, Thoughtful, Helpful. I also made sure it had lots of detail.

I hope you enjoyed my blog post. Blog you later!

My Blog Profile DLO 2019

Hello this is my 2019 Blog Profile. I have been learning with Gerhard to make a blog profile this year. I made it with google slides and incredibox for the music. And used Screencastify to record. Blog you later!

My Personalized Google logo!

Kia Ora Everyone, This week in Te Ana Ako we got to choose  either hour of code star wars or making our on Google logo I did the hour of code but I had enough time left that I could do both. However I am only going to blog about my Google logo. We used Scratch and customize
the Google logo. Here is a screenshot of my own. And Also if you click on Make My Google logo you will find the link.

Make My Google logo

The Yuckiest Ice Cream (My Exciting Narrative)

Hello everyone, in Term 4 Te Ana Ako was working on writing a narrative. I missed the first day because I had a migraine the day before, but I quickly caught up. And on the 7th of December I was finished. Click on the word Yucky Ice cream or the image for the link. I hope you enjoy it.

Yucky Ice Cream

Frantic, Amazing, Fun, Wooing CYBERSMART GAME!

Hello Everyone Today I was playing the Cybersmart Game. Gerhard Helped us when we were stuck. The Cybersmart Game has lots of fun stuff like Blog Commenting, Tips and lots of other things. The Cybersmart game is like snakes and ladders so you don't get to do everything if you land on something more than once you don't have to do it. Here is a link to the Cybersmart Game

This one is about what to share on my Blog Profile.

This one was using Befunky.com.

In this one we had to comment on a blog.

On this one we looked at the most common passwords for 2015.

This one was about Copyright.

This one is about a quality blog post.

This one is what to do when you find something that is inappropriate.

This is a practice for a blog comment.

This one is the blog to choose from. I chose the (Y4) one.

I hope you enjoyed the pics.  Blog You Later! 

Term 4 Week 3 Creative writing (Not Free Writing!)

Hello Everyone in Week 3 We looked at a Mammoth and a Man picture. I pretended that I was the man with the Hair dryer. And I thought that Vikings had came and took the Mammoth and poured water that was -6000 degrees celsius. If you click on the link it will take you to my writing.

Link to my work

Blog you later.